Re: Video ad for kde - Code in

On Friday 17 December 2010, Aaron J. Seigo wrote:
> it just gets better! :)
> 
> On Saturday, December 11, 2010, Carl Symons wrote:
> > Years ago,
> > we started with an idea to make things easy
> 
> "with an idea" => "with the idea"?

+1

> > and developed it further to be efficient.
> 
> "to be efficient" => "to include efficiency"?

-1
nuu, ugly ;)

> > We are not free because we chose,
> 
> hm.. maybe more poetic phrasing is called for here, to capture the romance
> of it?
> 
> "We are free not because we chose,"

+1 ;)


Cheers,
Marco Martin
 
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