Re: Second version of the booklet

Hi,

Here's a list of minor corrections I've identified.  I'll keep reading
through and provide more comments as I get the time, but I know you're up
against a deadline.

Vivek


Page 2: inset - TODO before printing / finalizing:
1. remove "YOUR NAME" (maybe replace with "and others")
2. Add credits for graphics, currently has no names.

Page 3: Improper quotes around "Quick Tweet":
>KDE micro-blogging application. It has a simple
>„Quick Tweet“; with it, a click of a button is all you

Page 4: wording when talking about Blogilo: suggest replacing "top" with
"best"
>The top is that it handles multiple blogs

Page 4: mention Emails for Kontact introduction:
>Manage your life with Kontact. Keep track of your
> appointments, deadlines and vacations, manage
Suggestion (change in *bold*): *Read your emails, keep* track of your
appointments, [...]

Page 4: inset - Improper quotes around "start" and "All":
>super key often has the
> ‚start‘ text on it, or a
and
> ticking the „All“ check box.

Page 4: inset re: Kontact components: fix punctuation: replace . with , at
end of first sentence.
Currently:
Although you can
open the Kontact
components separa-
tely, e.g. for Mail, Ca-
lendar or Contacts.
They are tailored to
work well with each
other within Kontact.

Suggestion (change in *bold*): Although [...] or Contacts*, they* [...].


Page 5: Improper quotes on Let's and Kontact's:
> Let‘s take a look at some of them!

> Kontact‘s email component

> Kontact‘s Calendar

Page 6: quotes on 'torrent':
>   It is easy to create a ‚torrent‘ to

Page 6: inset - fix quotes for "Blog preview" and "Fetch blog style" and
"mail apps" below:
Currently:
In Blogilo, you can pre-
view your published post
by selecting the „Blog
preview“ tab and clicking
on the „Fetch blog style“
button. Shortly, you will [...]

and:
Its appeal among
other „mail apps“ is
that you get a very

Page 7: quotes on aren't:
> Learning and playing aren‘t ...

Page 9: *Battleship* has been renamed (trademark issues) to *Naval Battle*.

Page 9: quotes on "you're" and "game's" in the box starting with "KDE Games
are quick and easy to learn"

Page 10: inset: games.kde.org should not be truncated across two lines
(sorry if that repeats a comment from someone else..).

Page 12: box: suggest placing KMyMoney and Skrooge in *bold *font to match
normal procedure for program names.

Page 12: inset: fix improper apostrophe: Words'
> Words‘ side panels



On Fri, Jan 21, 2011 at 10:09 AM, Felix Michel <[email protected]> wrote:

>
> - workspaces part
> - link list
> - typos
>
> I suggest that people tell me where they find typos (page number) and then
> i
> correct them. To copy paste from the google docs is not really a good
> workflow
> for me, because then i will create new typos in my opinion.
>



> Ps: same location as usual: www.tradukt.ch/kde_booklet_ver2.pdf
>
>
>

 
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