Re: 4.9 ad for magazine

Martin Klapetek <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.comp.kde.events
Message-ID <CAPLgePqfTZrq1weKLBRdp2r5scLBFT=d=DyBwVey=LHVyKhJWg__17451.2234436863$1344591118$gmane$org@mail.gmail.com>
Hi

On Fri, Aug 10, 2012 at 1:05 AM, viviane nonato <[email protected]>wrote:

> sorry have not sent before a preview of what I'm working, is that before I
> thought of doing a drawing of Claire, I'm not satisfied with what he was
> drawing. So today I tried to do something simple. I think we need more
> input on the layout.
>

I have few remarks
 * the KDE font is wrong, it's not the 'official' KDE font
 * there should be space between "beautifully free"
 * do not ever ever stretch images, but rather crop - see the white
circles, they are squished
 * the screenshot is very tiny and as such does not serve much purpose
 * Clarie, on the other hand, is too big. I think it's very nice to put her
there, but should that be the main 'message' of the /advertisement/?
 * what's with the blue rectangle on top-left?
 * the KDE logo next to Clair's name should be next to KDE I think
 * also the font for Clair's name is not good

That's all I can see on a quick look :)

-- 
Martin Klapetek | KDE Developer


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