Re: 4.9 ad for magazine

Hi, I liked his comments, below a few more questions.

I have few remarks
  * The KDE font is wrong, it's not the 'official' KDE font

What is the official font?

  * Should there be space between "beautifully free"

In the previous announcement is the next version 4.8, the space between
letters is very small.

  * Not ever ever stretch the images, but rather crop - see the white
circles, They are squished

he white circles are not crushed, are bitmaps that are not part of the
wallpaper.

  * The screenshot is very tiny and the such does not serve much purpose

In the list is how to attach, then insert the image as a message.

  * Claire, on the Other hand, is too big. I think it's very nice to put
her there, but the main Should That Be 'message' of the / advertisement /?

I think we should keep the idea of honor, a matter that is accurate picture
of Claire with a good resolution, so I do not.

  * What's with the blue rectangle on top-left?

It is a blue rectangle, some things do not need symbolism.

  * The KDE logo next to Clair's name Should be next to KDE I think

But is the official logo.

  * Also the font is Clair's name is not good

What font do you suggest?

That's all I can see on a quick look :)

Thank you.

2012/8/10 Martin Klapetek <[email protected]>

> Hi
>
> On Fri, Aug 10, 2012 at 1:05 AM, viviane nonato <[email protected]>wrote:
>
>> sorry have not sent before a preview of what I'm working, is that before
>> I thought of doing a drawing of Claire, I'm not satisfied with what he was
>> drawing. So today I tried to do something simple. I think we need more
>> input on the layout.
>>
>
> I have few remarks
>  * the KDE font is wrong, it's not the 'official' KDE font
>  * there should be space between "beautifully free"
>  * do not ever ever stretch images, but rather crop - see the white
> circles, they are squished
>  * the screenshot is very tiny and as such does not serve much purpose
>  * Clarie, on the other hand, is too big. I think it's very nice to put
> her there, but should that be the main 'message' of the /advertisement/?
>  * what's with the blue rectangle on top-left?
>  * the KDE logo next to Clair's name should be next to KDE I think
>  * also the font for Clair's name is not good
>
> That's all I can see on a quick look :)
>
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> Martin Klapetek | KDE Developer
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