Re: 4.9 ad for magazine

Kenny Duffus <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.comp.kde.events
Message-ID <1392829.Obzt7dEE9G__4036.68359290368$1344775378$gmane$org@sputnik>
On Sunday 12 August 00:55:46 David Edmundson wrote:
> I had a go myself. Just throwing some ideas together. I used to work
> at a publishers for a year.
> 
> There's a few "bugs", and it could do with something that says what's
> new in 4.9 (maybe) as well as why one should care about KDE in
> general.
> 
> Will be happy to merge ideas on anything else that comes up.
> 

looks good

some thoughts:

* maybe "beautifully free" would look better left alligned, to go with "why 
kde"
* http:// is probably redundant?
* cropping round jtg logo is a bit rough
* why kde section could maybe move down a bit to look a little less crushed 
together
* "KDE Software 4.9" would be better than all caps
* i wonder if KDE Releases 4.9 would fit better with the sentiment of the 
design?

-- 

	Kenny

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