Re: Randa Meetings 2015 story almost ready - please proofread

El Saturday 21 November 2015, a les 11:23:39, Mario Fux va escriure:
> Morning
> 
> The dot story for the Randa Meetings 2015 dot story is finally almost ready:
> https://dot.kde.org/2015/11/21/randa-meetings-2015-huge-success-again
> 
> Please proofread and help.

 SOMEHOW INCLUDE THE PICTURE DIRECTLY -> Agree

Touch&Mobile - Bring Touch to KDE  <- this needs to be a header?

I'd link some word of " As we pointed out during the fundraiser" to https://
www.kde.org/fundraisers/kdesprints2015

And if you can find a way to sneak a sentence saying "donate more at https://
www.kde.org/community/donations/index.php" somewhere that'd also be cool ;)

Typos:
 * participatens -> participants
 * KDE Connect - blabla
 * seperate -> separate
 * coordinational -> coordination ?
 * heterogenous -> heterogeneous
 * expertience -> experience? expertize?
 * jens -> Jens
 * commmand -> command
 * busses -> buses
 * dicussed -> discussed

Cheers,
  Albert

> 
> Thanks
> Mario
> 
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