Re: [Discuss] Randa Meetings 2015 story almost ready - please proofread

Am Saturday 21 November 2015, 15.17:19 schrieb Albert Astals Cid:

Morning Albert

> El Saturday 21 November 2015, a les 11:23:39, Mario Fux va escriure:
> > Morning
> > 
> > The dot story for the Randa Meetings 2015 dot story is finally almost
> > ready:
> > https://dot.kde.org/2015/11/21/randa-meetings-2015-huge-success-again
> > 
> > Please proofread and help.
> 
>  SOMEHOW INCLUDE THE PICTURE DIRECTLY -> Agree

Soon to follow. Need the ack from Gilles.

> Touch&Mobile - Bring Touch to KDE  <- this needs to be a header?

Yes. It's the sixth group more or less.

> I'd link some word of " As we pointed out during the fundraiser" to https://
> www.kde.org/fundraisers/kdesprints2015

Done.

> And if you can find a way to sneak a sentence saying "donate more at
> https:// www.kde.org/community/donations/index.php" somewhere that'd also
> be cool ;)

Too.

> Typos:
>  * participatens -> participants
>  * KDE Connect - blabla
>  * seperate -> separate
>  * coordinational -> coordination ?
>  * heterogenous -> heterogeneous
>  * expertience -> experience? expertize?
>  * jens -> Jens
>  * commmand -> command
>  * busses -> buses
>  * dicussed -> discussed

Fixed all of them and some more.

Thanks
Mario


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