Edit/Approval - Light My Fire FireSteel 2.0 - Shawn Chambers
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Shawn, Good job, and thanks for doing an OR on a small piece of gear. A few edits below, in the usual EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising you're cleared to upload to http://tinyurl.com/nutdwy6 Cheers, Richard ###Manufacturer: Light My Fire ### EDIT: Industrial Revolution [Light My Fire is one of this company's brands.] ### With all a fire offers it is little wonder that a redundant system is employed by many backcountry hikers to ensure that a fire can be built even in adverse conditions.### EDIT: As written this is projection – speculating on what others do. Please rephrase so that you're reporting only on your own experience. [Say ". . . I like some redundancy in my kit to ensure . . ."] Edit: While there's redundancy, it's not one integrated redundant system. A matter of style, so up to you. ### The smaller Scout model was definitely enough fire power for me. ### Edit: firepower [one word] ### In the Field ### EDIT: Please add a couple of sentences about locations, temperatures, and other actual field conditions. A summary is fine, but we require some details. ### The size, weight, and ability to be used thousands of times makes the FireSteel a great value. ### EDIT: make the FireSteel [Plural subject requires a plural verb.]