Edit/Approval - Sea to Summit Ultra-Sil - Kathy Waters

Kathy,
  
 Only a few nits below. After revising you may upload; be sure to click the Owner Review box. Don’t forget to delete your Tests/OR folder copy.
  
 Cheers, Richard
 
  
 ### My son, daughter-in-law and granddaughter, Jillian and I were going to set-up a base camp ###
 Edit: Delete the comma after "Jillian," as with it one might read it as five people, not four, on the trip.
  
 ### Oh yeah, and a ski cap and light gloves, go in there, too. ###
 Edit: Another unnecessary comma, after "gloves."
  
 ### After a half dozen treks, I did thrown it in a pan of cold sudsy water (tech wash) and now it looks brand-new.###
 EDIT: throw it in
 EDIT: Tech Wash [If that's what you used. It's a brand and should have initial caps. If it wasn't that brand, then "a tech-specific product."]
  
 
 ### It's lightweight and perfectly-sized for the sort of gear I need ###
 Edit: perfectly sized [two words, no hyphen]