Edit/Approval - Camelbak Chute 1L - Kathy Waters

Kathy,
  
 Edits below in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/knxdgbj
  
 Cheers, Richard
 
  
 ### This tether keeps the cap attached to the bottle so it doesn't get lost and forms a convenient, comfortable carry handle. The cap opens (and closes) with just a half a turn and threads internally ###
 Edit: Drop an "a" – "just half a turn" or "just a half-turn"
  
  
 ### I have used it on every outing I've made in the last 2 months ###
 Edit: two months
  
 ###This is great for me, but I have a tendency to drop things and my butter-fingers have led to the tossing of a few water bottles which went topless in the field. ###
 Edit: A bit confusing, cleared up if you substitute "as" for "but."
  
 
 ###I'm always on the look-out for the next new-and-improved water bottle. ###
 Edit: lookout [one word, no hyphen]