Edit/Approval - Big Agnes Helinox Chair One - Kathy Waters

Kathy,
  
 I'm going to try out one of these! A few minor edits, in the usual format, below; after revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/c2nntrt
  
 Cheers, Richard
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 General COMMENT: Photos of assembling the Chair would truly enhance this Review.
  
 ### Manufacturer: Big Agnes ###
 EDIT: Big Agnes, Inc.
  
 ###MSRP: US $99.95 (Multicam and all the Tactical colors are $109.95) ###
 Comment: I wonder if camo is stouter fabric, or if it's just more popular.
  
 ### They do a lot of backpacking into a site and setting up a base camp, then further exploring/hiking from the base camp. I thought the Helinox Chair One would work well for them. ###
 Comment: They sound like me.
  
 ### First off, these Chairs are probably one of the lightest camp chairs around at just about 2 lb (910 g). ###
 EDIT: I'd call this projection. Make it clear that this is your opinion.
 Edit: "Chairs" is plural, "one of" singular. How about "these Chairs are among the lightest camp chairs I've seen."
  
 ### The full-length zipper makes it a breeze to remove the Chari and to put it back in. ###
 EDIT: Ah, Cheri, I think you mean "Chair."
  
 
 ### Actually, we still tease her 5 months later! ###
 Edit: As it's not a measurement, I'd use "five months."