RE: Edit/Approval - Big Agnes Helinox Chair One - Kathy Waters

"'Kathy Waters' kathy-UFS7mITjnAiGkU+Z+ufpa1aTQe2KTcn/@public.gmane.org [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]>
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Richard!

 

Hit the send button too soon!  Sorry about that!  Anyway, I made your suggested Edits, deleted the test file and uploaded to the proper link.  You should get one of these!  BA usually has them on sale for the Conservation Alliance at half the MSRP.  (They take credit cards, too!)

 

Thanks for the work on this one.

 

Kathy

 

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Sent: Sunday, November 23, 2014 8:39 AM
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Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Big Agnes Helinox Chair One - Kathy Waters

 






Kathy,

 

I'm going to try out one of these! A few minor edits, in the usual format, below; after revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/c2nntrt

 

Cheers, Richard

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General COMMENT: Photos of assembling the Chair would truly enhance this Review.

 

### Manufacturer: Big Agnes ###
EDIT: Big Agnes, Inc.

 

###MSRP: US $99.95 (Multicam and all the Tactical colors are $109.95) ###
Comment: I wonder if camo is stouter fabric, or if it's just more popular.

 

### They do a lot of backpacking into a site and setting up a base camp, then further exploring/hiking from the base camp. I thought the Helinox Chair One would work well for them. ###
Comment: They sound like me.

 

### First off, these Chairs are probably one of the lightest camp chairs around at just about 2 lb (910 g). ###
EDIT: I'd call this projection. Make it clear that this is your opinion.

Edit: "Chairs" is plural, "one of" singular. How about "these Chairs are among the lightest camp chairs I've seen."

 

### The full-length zipper makes it a breeze to remove the Chari and to put it back in. ###
EDIT: Ah, Cheri, I think you mean "Chair."

 

### Actually, we still tease her 5 months later! ###
Edit: As it's not a measurement, I'd use "five months."
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