RE: Edit/Approval - Camelbak Chute 1L - Kathy Waters
"'Kathy Waters' kathy-UFS7mITjnAiGkU+Z+ufpa1aTQe2KTcn/@public.gmane.org [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]>
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Richard, Made the suggested edits, deleted the test file and uploaded. Thanks for your work on this one as well! Kathy From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Sunday, November 23, 2014 8:37 AM To: [email protected] Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Camelbak Chute 1L - Kathy Waters Kathy, Edits below in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/knxdgbj Cheers, Richard ### This tether keeps the cap attached to the bottle so it doesn't get lost and forms a convenient, comfortable carry handle. The cap opens (and closes) with just a half a turn and threads internally ### Edit: Drop an "a" – "just half a turn" or "just a half-turn" ### I have used it on every outing I've made in the last 2 months ### Edit: two months ###This is great for me, but I have a tendency to drop things and my butter-fingers have led to the tossing of a few water bottles which went topless in the field. ### Edit: A bit confusing, cleared up if you substitute "as" for "but." ###I'm always on the look-out for the next new-and-improved water bottle. ### Edit: lookout [one word, no hyphen]