RE: Edit/Approval - Sea to Summit Ultra-Sil - Kathy Waters
"'Kathy Waters' kathy-UFS7mITjnAiGkU+Z+ufpa1aTQe2KTcn/@public.gmane.org [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]>
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Richard, I made your suggested edits, deleted the file in the test folder and uploaded the review. I did, however, have to create the folder. It’s not the same as the Sea to Summit DRY Day Pack that BGT tested – it’s simply the Sea to Summit Day Pack. Thanks for your work today! Kathy From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Saturday, November 22, 2014 8:20 AM To: [email protected] Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Sea to Summit Ultra-Sil - Kathy Waters Kathy, Only a few nits below. After revising you may upload; be sure to click the Owner Review box. Don’t forget to delete your Tests/OR folder copy. Cheers, Richard ### My son, daughter-in-law and granddaughter, Jillian and I were going to set-up a base camp ### Edit: Delete the comma after "Jillian," as with it one might read it as five people, not four, on the trip. ### Oh yeah, and a ski cap and light gloves, go in there, too. ### Edit: Another unnecessary comma, after "gloves." ### After a half dozen treks, I did thrown it in a pan of cold sudsy water (tech wash) and now it looks brand-new.### EDIT: throw it in EDIT: Tech Wash [If that's what you used. It's a brand and should have initial caps. If it wasn't that brand, then "a tech-specific product."] ### It's lightweight and perfectly-sized for the sort of gear I need ### Edit: perfectly sized [two words, no hyphen]