Re: Edit/Approval - Black Stallion Gloves - Doug White

Thanks for the extra time on the edits. I think I got them all. I had to remove the word "cowhide" from the title to get it to work. Seemed to work. I went ahead and uploaded. Please let me know if I need to change anything else. Thanks again. 

     On Sunday, March 8, 2015 9:03 AM, "[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> wrote:
   

     Doug,  Thanks for the quick turnaround. A few minor edits below inthe standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. The first two are the most important. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/nsmtvpo  Congratulations on a Brownie Point.  Cheers, Richard   ### BLACK STALLION WATERPROOF LINED INSULATED COWHIDE WINTERWOR ###EDIT: Apparently Report Writer won't let a title spill overonto a second line without some effort. Can you break the title into two lines,or make some other fix? (I don't use Report Writer and can't help you there. Ifyou do need help try the BGT Upload Help group.) But you need to complete thetitle.  You missed one of my EDITs on the last go-round: You need tostate somewhere if you do or do not wear the gloves when hiking.  ### Measured Length (Pair): 6 x 11 in (15 x 28 cm) ###EDIT: Delete "(Pair)" You've given the length ofone glove.  ### They are insulated with a multi-blend insulation.  ###EDIT: MultiBlend [I missed this last time. MultiBlend is abrand or trade name and thus must be used just as the manufacturer does.]  ### Thethumb design is labeled as "natural wing" by the manufacturer thatallows for versatile movement and is less stiff. ###
EDIT: Make this two sentences: "The thumb design is labeled as"natural wing" by the manufacturer. This allows for versatilemovement and is less stiff." Or "The thumb design, which is labeledas "natural wing" by the manufacturer, allows for versatile movementand is less stiff."  ### The leather has worn slightly leaving some flat andblemished spots on the fingertips, ###
Edit: fingertips [one word]
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