Edit/Approval OR-Osprey Poco Premium Child Carrier-Doug White

Hey Doug, 
 

 Nice to see children's gear reviewed, looks like this one's a winner for you.  Found a number of corrections, from spelling to clarification, but when you've fixed them up go ahead and upload to
 Packs > Infant and Child Carriers > Osprey POCO Premium
 and delete your draft folder.
 

 Usual BGT:
 EDIT: must be changed
 Edit: should be changed but will be left to your discretion
 Comment: just that or something to think about
 

 ~Bob
 

 

 ###Colors Offerred: Gray, Blue, Red
 EDIT:  Offered
 

 ###Per the manufacturer's website, the pack comes with a lifetime guarentee.
 EDIT:  guarantee
 

 ###Some other great features included with the pack are a removeable drool pad
 EDIT:  removable
 

 ###The pack also includes a detatchable daypack
 EDIT:  detachable
 

 ###Extra offered acessories (not included) are a carrying case
 EDIT:  accessories
 

 ###an exclusive pouch for dirty diapers, 
 Edit:  this sounds promotional, best to drop "exclusive"
 

 ###This also is an easy buckle pull and slide adjustment of the saddle assembly to lower or raise the seat. 
 EDIT:  pull-and-slide
 

 ###I use the sunshade almost every time I use the pack, not only for sun protection but it blocks the wind and it is nice if I accidently hit any tree branches, as the shade diverts them away from the child. 
 EDIT:  ...for sun protection but also for blocking the wind; it's also nice if I...
 EDIT:  accidentally
 EDIT:  ...as the sunshade diverts...
 

 ###The pack has been used to carry children during all four seasons including deep powder snow with snoeshoes,
 EDIT:  snowshoes
 

 ###I have used the hydration sleeve as well for a large water bladder and it functions great. 
 Edit:  ...for holding a large water bladder...  (otherwise it sounds like you're using the sleeve itself for holding water)
 

 ###I love the amount of exterior pockets, 
 EDIT:  number of exterior pockets
 

 ###These exterior pockets are great for a gps, camera, snacks, etc.
 EDIT:  GPS
 

 ###I feel the manufacturer could have included more interior organzation pockets for diapers, etc.
 EDIT:  organization
 

 ###The pack even has an exclusive pocket for a dirty diaper. 
 Edit: this sounds promotional, best to drop "exclusive"
 

 ###but for how ridgid and durable it is, maybe it was built just right.
 EDIT:  rigid
 

 ###Water Bladder sleeve
 EDIT:  bladder
 

 ###Easy to use sunshade
 EDIT:  Easy-to-use