Thanks for the edits. I sure missed a bunch. Thanks for the time. Uploading now.
On Tuesday, June 9, 2015 3:40 PM, "geartest-KbpwapPNqs/[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> wrote:
Hey Doug,
Nice to see children's gear reviewed, looks like this one's a winner for you. Found a number of corrections, from spelling to clarification, but when you've fixed them up go ahead and upload toPacks > Infant and Child Carriers > Osprey POCO Premiumand delete your draft folder.
Usual BGT:EDIT: must be changedEdit: should be changed but will be left to your discretionComment: just that or something to think about
~Bob
###Colors Offerred: Gray, Blue, RedEDIT: Offered
###Per the manufacturer's website, the pack comes with a lifetime guarentee.EDIT: guarantee
###Some other great features included with the pack are a removeable drool padEDIT: removable
###The pack also includes a detatchable daypackEDIT: detachable
###Extra offered acessories (not included) are a carrying caseEDIT: accessories
###an exclusive pouch for dirty diapers, Edit: this sounds promotional, best to drop "exclusive"
###This also is an easy buckle pull and slide adjustment of the saddle assembly to lower or raise the seat. EDIT: pull-and-slide
###I use the sunshade almost every time I use the pack, not only for sun protection but it blocks the wind and it is nice if I accidently hit any tree branches, as the shade diverts them away from the child. EDIT: ...for sun protection but also for blocking the wind; it's also nice if I...EDIT: accidentallyEDIT: ...as the sunshade diverts...
###The pack has been used to carry children during all four seasons including deep powder snow with snoeshoes,EDIT: snowshoes
###I have used the hydration sleeve as well for a large water bladder and it functions great. Edit: ...for holding a large water bladder... (otherwise it sounds like you're using the sleeve itself for holding water)
###I love the amount of exterior pockets, EDIT: number of exterior pockets
###These exterior pockets are great for a gps, camera, snacks, etc.EDIT: GPS
###I feel the manufacturer could have included more interior organzation pockets for diapers, etc.EDIT: organization
###The pack even has an exclusive pocket for a dirty diaper. Edit: this sounds promotional, best to drop "exclusive"
###but for how ridgid and durable it is, maybe it was built just right.EDIT: rigid
###Water Bladder sleeveEDIT: bladder
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