Edit/Approval - Aerobie Dogobie Flying Disk

Mike – Good choice for an OR, and excellent report. I'm particularly interested as I just got a new puppie! Edits below, in the standard BGT EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/q289f8q, at which time you'll earn a Brownie point.
  
 Cheers, Richard
  
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 I worked in Afghanistan for 4 years & rely on my equipment ###
 EDIT: and rely [Ampersands are used only in company names and, at the other end of the spectrum, text messages.]
  
 ### This disk is a catch and fetch toy, not intended as a dog's chew toy. It is flexible, puncture, tear resistant and intended to be gentle to a dog's mouth and teeth. ###
 Edit: catch-and-fetch [two hyphens]
 EDIT: puncture- and tear-resistant 
  
 ### It is a lightweight toy, that, is also rugged and while flexible, ###
 Edit: Delete the comma after "toy"
  
 ### I have found that the disk is incredibly resilient to abrasion. ###
 EDIT: incredibly resistant to abrasion [At least that's what I think you mean.]
  
 ###The disk is easily handled and thrown, without causing any uncomfortableness to my hand or fingers.###
 Edit: "discomfort" works better than "uncomfortableness"
  
 ### Petey will search everywhere, to find his disk ###
 Edit: comma is unnecessary
  
 ###I can not identify any negative aspects of this toy. ###
 Edit: cannot [one word]
  
 ###This seems to be a perfect toy for adults, kids, and dogs.###
 
 Edit/Comment: Somewhere in your OR you might explain why it's perfect for adults and kids. You don't describe anything but dog use.