Re: Edit/Approval - Aerobie Dogobie Flying Disk

Hi Richard, 
Thank you for the edits! All have been addressed and it has been uploaded.
See you on the next one.
Mike

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Sent: Tuesday, June 16, 2015 9:45 PM
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Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Aerobie Dogobie Flying Disk

  

Mike – Good choice for an OR, and excellent report. I'm particularly interested as I just got a new puppie! Edits below, in the standard BGT EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/q289f8q, at which time you'll earn a Brownie point.



Cheers, Richard



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I worked in Afghanistan for 4 years & rely on my equipment ###
EDIT: and rely [Ampersands are used only in company names and, at the other end of the spectrum, text messages.]



### This disk is a catch and fetch toy, not intended as a dog's chew toy. It is flexible, puncture, tear resistant and intended to be gentle to a dog's mouth and teeth. ###
Edit: catch-and-fetch [two hyphens]

EDIT: puncture- and tear-resistant 



### It is a lightweight toy, that, is also rugged and while flexible, ###
Edit: Delete the comma after "toy"



### I have found that the disk is incredibly resilient to abrasion. ###
EDIT: incredibly resistant to abrasion [At least that's what I think you mean.]



###The disk is easily handled and thrown, without causing any uncomfortableness to my hand or fingers.###
Edit: "discomfort" works better than "uncomfortableness"



### Petey will search everywhere, to find his disk ###
Edit: comma is unnecessary



###I can not identify any negative aspects of this toy. ###
Edit: cannot [one word]



###This seems to be a perfect toy for adults, kids, and dogs.###

Edit/Comment: Somewhere in your OR you might explain why it's perfect for adults and kids. You don't describe anything but dog use.