Edit/Approval - The Deuce of Spades - Frances Penn
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Fran, Great subject of an OR; thanks for posting. Edits below in the standard BGT EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/q36ztjp Cheers, Richard __________________ ### TENTLAB DEUCE OF SPADES [Title] ### EDIT: Need to be precise here – THE TENTLAB THE DEUCE OF SPACES. OK to omit either "the" elsewhere in the OR. ### Manufacturer: TheTentLab ### EDIT: Inkling Inc. ### Weight: .6 oz (17 g) Measured Weight: .6 oz (17 g)### EDIT: 0.6 oz (in both places. Too easy to miss that little decimal point.) ### The trowel can only be purchased on the website at the moment but will hit retailers shelves later this year. ### EDIT: but the manufacturer says it will hit [Otherwise it's projerction] EDIT: retailers' [possessive, with an apostrophe] ### When I was using the orange plastic trowel previously, I would sometimes forget it or figure I didn't need it and then had to make a trip back to my pack to retrieve it to complete the process. ### Edit/Comment: From your earlier commentary I think you attribute this to the orange trowel's different shape. Might make that a bit more explicit. I figured it out though, so up to you.