Re: Edit/Approval - Light My Fire Cup - Bob Dorenfeld

"geartest-KbpwapPNqs/[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]>
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 I found a citation for keeping the space after the first hyphen and "and" (removing it would concatenate a noun and a conjunction).
 

 from the Chicago Manual of Style:
 

     If two phrasal adjectives end in a common element, the ending element should appear only with the second phrase, and a suspension hyphen should follow the unattached words to show that they are related to the ending element: middle- and upper-class operagoers. But if two phrasal adjectives begin with a common element, a hyphen is usually inappropriate, and the element should be repeated: left-handed and left-brained executives.
 


---In [email protected], <montana.angler@...> wrote :

 OK Bob,
  
 Another excellent review and my third Brownie point of the day.  Two minor EDITs below; after revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/pwy9o2y
  
 Cheers, Richard
  

  
 ### The cup holds 260 ml, which at just over 8 oz is just right for a cup of coffee in the morning, ###
 EDIT: 8 fluid ounces (or fl oz, or one cup) Volume, not weight.
  
 
 ###Light My Fire says that the cup is dishwasher- and microwave-safe, ###
 EDIT: Delete the space between the first hyphen and "and"
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