EDIT/APPROVAL - Ahnu Sugarpines - Kathy Waters
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Kathy, A few edits, in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/nf7t3b9 http://tinyurl.com/nf7t3b9. See you on the next one. Congratulations on a Brownie point. Cheers, Richard _________________________ ###LOCATION: Canon City, Colorado, USA ### Edit: Everywhere else in the Review you have the little squiggle – Cañon City [also on piñon]. Why not here? ### Sizes Available: 5 - 11 Women's ### Edit: Does Ahnu indicate a width? If so I'd add it. ### approximately 100,000 acres (40,468 hectares) of Bureau of Land Management (BLM) land ### Edit: Imperial is approximate, so I'd round off the Continental to 40,000 hectares. ### The shoe laces are inconspicuous ### Edit: shoelaces [one word] ### so it could just be the fact that the Sugarpines are low-cut shoes without that extra structure I need about my ankles. ### Edit: for my ankles ### Thanks to my spare socks and the Sugarpines quick-drying, the hike continued with no real damage sustained.### Edit: Sugarpines' [possessive] EDIT: quick drying [two words, no apostrophe] ### I think they turned out pretty good! ### EDIT: pretty well ### The Sugarpines spent most of the winter pining (pun intended) in my gear closet. ### Comment: Equally appalling.