Re: EDIT/APPROVAL OR- Marmot Plasma 15- Doug White

Thanks for the edits. I appreciate your time.  


     On Thursday, July 9, 2015 7:23 PM, "geartest-KbpwapPNqs/[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> wrote:
   

     Hi Doug, 
Nice review and clear, helpful pics.  Several edits for you in the usual BGT format: EDIT: must be changedEdit: should be changed but will be left to your discretionComment: just that or something to think about
When corrected, you can upload to:Sleep Gear > Sleeping Bags > Marmot Plasma 15
Don't forget to delete your draft folder.
Happy trails, ~Bob

###Fill power: 900 (Note than manufacturer now calls it 875+)EDIT:  (Note: the manufacturer
EDIT: Please add when you purchased it, or when you believe it was manufactured (since you do make it clear that you don't have the latest version)
###The vertical baffle system is claimed to allow heat transfer vertically instead of horizontally so that the body extremeties are warmed more efficiently.EDIT:  extremities
###The bag is only offerred in one colorEDIT: offered
###The zipper is only offerred as a left-zip optionEDIT: offered
###Black for the exterior and beluga(blue) for the interior. EDIT: beluga (blue) 
###It is my go to bag for three-season use. EDIT:  go-to
###I do find when I get any cold spots, some light fluffing of the down and it is fixed. Edit: would read better this way (but your call):  I do find that when I get any cold spots I lightly fluff the down and it is fixed.
###both of them in the stuff sack together for extra space saving in my backpack. EDIT:  space-saving
###I have noticed that the zipper tends to stick a little. Luckily the fabric is thin enough, it can be pulled out of the snagged zipper with no damage to the fabric.EDIT: first phrase not clear, do you mean the zipper teeth stick, or that the fabic is getting stuck in the teeth (or both)?Comment:  if the former, you can get zipper lubricant that helps it run smoothly.  I have found that bag zippers are always prone to fabric snagging occasionally, no matter how well designed.
###The same thing occurrs when snow falls on itEDIT: occurs

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