Edit/Approval - NothinZ Closed Top Shoes - Brian Stoner

Brian,
  
 Well done, sir! I have only a few additional edits, again in standard BGT format:
  
      EDIT (all caps) – required change
      Edit (initial cap) – suggested change or request for clarification
      Comment – just that, no change requiredNOTHINZ CLOSED TOP SHOES
  
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 Cheers, Richard
 
  
 General Comment: Particularly well done on revising your profile.
  
 ### Manufacturer Description: This popular alternative to our best-selling polymer shoe is a little less breezy than the original. ###
 EDIT: This is a quotation, so add quotation marks. 
  
 ### I think the shoe material is technically waterproof, although they do not keep feet dry.###
 EDIT: it does not keep ["shoe material" is singular]
  
 ### Generally, I buy shoes in either 11 or 12 in men's sizes. ###
 EDIT: men's (US) sizes [Many shoes made in Europe use other sizing conventions.]
  
 ### The shoes are able to be slipped on in both strap positions. ###
 Edit: This sounds a bit awkward. Try an active verb, perhaps "I can easily slip them on in both strap positions." A style issue, so up to you.
  
 ### However, the strap is removable and could become disconnected on the trail and the shoe could be lost. I have yet to experience this, ###
 Comment: You're right to be worried; I once lost a water shoe that I thought was strapped to the outside of my pack.