Re: Edit/Approval - NothinZ Closed Top Shoes - Brian Stoner
"Brian Stoner brianhstoner-/[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> Fri, 26 Feb 2016 02:35:22 +0000 (UTC)
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The report is uploaded! Woohoo my first OR is complete! Thanks for your help.
One lingering issue though is the test file. Somehow there were two versions there and I could delete one but not the other. I'm not sure what's going on there but hopefully we can figure that out.
Brian
On Sunday, February 21, 2016 11:37 AM, "[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> wrote:
Brian, Well done, sir! I have only a few additional edits, again instandard BGT format: EDIT (all caps) – required change Edit (initial cap) – suggested change or request forclarification Comment – just that, no change requiredNOTHINZ CLOSED TOPSHOES After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/gpjfnro Be sure to click the "Owner Review"button when doing so. Delete your Tests/OR folder copy. Congratulations on completing your first Owner Review! Cheers, Richard General Comment: Particularly well done on revising yourprofile. ### Manufacturer Description: This popular alternative to our best-selling polymer shoeis a little less breezy than the original. ###EDIT: This is a quotation, so add quotation marks. ### I think the shoe material is technically waterproof,although they donot keep feet dry.###EDIT: it does not keep ["shoe material" issingular] ### Generally, I buy shoes in either 11 or 12 in men's sizes. ###
EDIT: men's (US) sizes [Many shoes made in Europe use other sizing conventions.] ### Theshoes are able to be slipped on in both strap positions. ###
Edit: This sounds a bit awkward. Try an active verb, perhaps "I can easilyslip them on in both strap positions." A style issue, so up to you. ### However, the strap is removable and couldbecome disconnected on the trail and the shoe could be lost. I have yet to experience this,###
Comment: You're right to be worried; I once lost a water shoe that I thoughtwas strapped to the outside of my pack.
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