Edit - Mountain Equipment Eclipse - Kathy Waters

"[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> 27 Apr 2016 16:10:53 -0700
Newsgroups gmane.culture.backpacking.backpackgeartest
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Kathy,
  
 On this one you need to add a description of this shirt in your own words, as I don't think it's a tee shirt in the everyday sense. Indicate long sleeves, describe  the material, and put this into a category – I'd call it a fleece base layer top. Rather than a full repost, just post the addition to this list, noting where you put it, and I'll review that. 
  
 Other edits in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format below.
  
 Cheers, Richard
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 ### PRODUCT INFORMATION  ###
 Comment: This is where I'd describe the shirt (see above).
  
 ### but I was able to wear the Eclipse on a couple of very cool- 28 F (16 C) one morning - days as well. ###
 EDIT: (-3 C)
  
 ### With "athletic fit" in mind, there is a LOT of seams. ###
 EDIT: there are
  
 ###They are flat-lockedstitched and positioned in such a manner that they has are not irritating even under a shifting backpack. ###
 EDIT: Delete "has"
  
 ### The stand-up collar seam is tucked inside so no stitching rubs my neck I did cut out the Mountain Equipment tag ###
 EDIT: Need a period after "neck."
  
 ### Though I didn't use that pocket much as it is very small - big enough for my mp3 player, ###
 EDIT: How small? Should be easy to measure.
  
 ### The best fit feature of the Eclipse is the generous length of the Eclipse. ###
 Edit: The "of the Eclipse" at the end is redundant. Consider deleting it.
  
 ### I have had very good experiences wearing the Eclipse as my first layer with an additional base layer (down vest), and a windproof jacket. ###
 EDIT: By definition you can only wear one base layer - there's only one base - in this case next to your skin. "with an additional layer" or "with a down vest as midlayer."
  
 ### No worries though, my abused tee still looks great and hasn't shrunken, stretch out, become misshapened or pilled! ###
 EDITs [3]: shrunk [not shrunken], stretched [not stretch] out, become misshapen [not misshappened]
 

 ### to use tech wash instead of detergent and line dry the tee instead of machine dryiing it in the future.###
 EDIT: drying [only one i]
  
 ### It is a really good mid-layer for me and I am very pleased with how well it held up through a lot of wear of ther winter months. ###
 Edit/Comment: I thought you used it mostly as a base layer.
 
 EDIT: over the winter months