Edit/Approval - EMS Women's Hooded Down Jacket - Marina Batzke

"[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> 22 Jul 2016 07:26:13 -0700
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Hi Marina –
  
 A Brownie Point for you! Some edits and suggestions below in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format; after revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/zk8a69c
  
 Cheers, Richard
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 ### The jacket shell and lining are 100% Nylon. The interlining is 100% Polyester. ###
 Edit: No need to capitalize "nylon" or "polyester."
  
 ### The Eastern Mountain Sports (EMS) Women's Hooded Down Jacket is an 800-fill downtek-treated goose down jacket.###
 EDIT: DownTek [Anything trademarked needs to be spelled exactly as the mark owner spells it. Here and one other place.]
  
 ### The neck area has 4.5 in (11.4 cm) of super-soft fleece all around. This keeps my neck warm when I wear the jacket open. And it keeps my chin warm when I have the jacket closed all the way to the top.###
 Edit/Comment: Does it block the wind? If so I'd mention that.
  
 ### 4) This low profile, fluffy down jacket does not give me the impression that I look like the Michelin man when I am wearing it. ###
 Edit: low-profile [with a hyphen]
 EDIT: Michelin Man [Another trademarked item]
 Comment: Good image!
  
 ### I feel cold easily and this down jacket has kept me comfortable and warm on all the occasions that I have worn it. I have worn the EMS hooded down jacket over a light undershirt and a long-sleeve shirt on some occasions. Plus when it was very cold, I have worn it with an undershirt, a long-sleeve shirt plus a fleece shirt underneath. ###
 Edit: Can you estimate the temperature ranges for when you don the jacket, and when there's a need for another layer? "very cold" is not too specific. Adding this would aid your Review.
  
 
 ### After 20 months of use, I see no torn threads or other imperfections. It has held up very well. ###
 Edit: Have you washed it or otherwise cared for it? If so, indicate what you've done; if not, say so.