Revizioj

Dankon, Ed, pro via traduko, kiun mi vias nur nun. Ĝi ĉiuokaze utilos por
la fina celo.

Amike

Renato


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From: Ian Fantom <[email protected]>
Date: 2016-03-17 14:56 GMT+00:00
Subject: Re: Revizioj
To: Renato Corsetti <[email protected]>


On 16/03/2016 22:44, Renato Corsetti wrote:

> Ian:
>
> | /Ed Robertson dolcxigas vin!//
> /
> Mi ne ricevis mesaĝon de li lastatempe.
>
> Li sendis la suban mesagxon al la malnova esper-brit:




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Subject: [esper-brit] Re: Mi bezonas denaskan anglalingvanon por revizii
chi tiun tekston
Date: 15 Mar 2016 04:21:58 -0700
From: [email protected] [esper-brit] <[email protected]>
Reply-To: [email protected]
To: [email protected]

Kara Renato, jen mia proponata revizio (ŝanĝoj diklitere), sed pliaj
plibonigoj certe eblas :

 "Esperanto: Language of communication and growth among our BRICS States


 Together, BRICS States represent 40 per cent of the world’s population,
and our economy is rapidly growing. The BRICS are now embarking on a number
of joint ventures and taking initiatives on common interests.


 If Member States want to cooperate with the aim of enabling more economic
growth, it is of paramount importance to gradually embrace a neutral common
language which in our view would be an easier task to implement and a more
cost-effective one than the use of the BRICS member States' main languages,
as these would overwhelm the countries’ learning systems only to produce
half-baked results.


 Esperanto, a language recommended by UNESCO for its member States,
including the BRICS countries, would be the solution to the above-mentioned
dilemma and had been intended to be taught in our schools. It was only due
to manipulation by the current super-powerful countries that that
particular recommendation has to date not been given due attention.


 It is well known that language diversity among countries in economic
partnership will always have implications, such as an increase in
translation and related costs, while ultimately limiting what would
otherwise be achieved had a neutral language been in use for economic
cooperation and development. It is in our view possible to come up with a
practical solution without falling into a trap of one-sided hegemony,
provided we adopt a proposed bilingual system which de facto would be made
possible by the use of a common neutral language (Esperanto). As BRICS
countries we should take advantage of the fact that the movement for the
promotion of an international neutral language has been in our midst for
quite a long time and its traditions have taken root.


 We invite our progressive BRICS’ governments to demonstrate courage by
paving the way to following the UNESCO recommendations cited earlier, as
this is a just cause and the right thing to do, potentially helping the
people of our countries to be who they always wanted to be while being able
to relate to the rest of the population of the world.


 Contact: brics@..."


 Amike


 Ed












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