RE: (GRE Success! ) Is there a grammar mistake in this sentence?

Hello all, 

I feel that the sentence should be something like this: "But the continuing
legal battle over.............may free Mr. Mulcaire to remove his view from
the center of the scandal." Though, the second chunk of sentence: ".....may
free Mr. Mulcaire to reveal his view from the center of scandal." -- Can
remain intact depending on the context and the meaning it tries to purport. 

 

"An" should be replaced with "the". 

 

I think the rest is okay. 

 

Thanks Srihari for actuating the group with nice questions and even that
from nytimes. Great!

 

Have a great time ahead. 

 

With warm regrads, 

Rajesh Chaudhary

 

From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On
Behalf Of Srihari Yamanoor
Sent: Wednesday, May 02, 2012 4:08 AM
To: [email protected]
Subject: (GRE Success! ) Is there a grammar mistake in this sentence?

 

  

Hello Everyone,

 

I guess there is no interest in playing the "comport" word game yet. Well,
here is a grammar question. Look at this sentence:

 

" But an continuing legal battle over the fees will be decided by
<http://topics.nytimes.com/top/news/international/countriesandterritories/un
itedkingdom/index.html?inline=nyt-geo> Britain's Supreme Court, the report
said, and the judgment may free Mr. Mulcaire to reveal his view from the
center of the scandal.  "

 

Do you see a grammar mistake anywhere? If so, what?

 

Take a chance, we will all learn from your answer!

 

http://www.nytimes.com/2012/05/02/world/europe/new-details-deepen-british-ph
one-hacking-scandal.html?_r=1 

 

Sincerely,

 

Srihari


 

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