Re: (GRE Success! ) An easy one - correct this sentence

One of these ought to be an improved version.

"As if post-abortion trauma isn’t controversial enough, an Oxford
academic argues in the Journal of Medical Ethics that it makes no
difference to the morality of abortion anyway."

"As if the existence of post-abortion trauma isn’t controversial
enough, an Oxford academic argues in the Journal of Medical Ethics
that it makes no difference to the morality of abortion anyway."

"As if the fact/claim/assertion/assumption that post-abortion trauma
exists isn’t controversial enough, an Oxford academic argues in the
Journal of Medical Ethics that it makes no difference to the morality
of abortion anyway."

Also, I feel the "anyway" at the end of the sentence should go away.

My $0.02.

Raghu


On Wed, Sep 12, 2012 at 3:18 PM, Kartik Datwani <[email protected]> wrote:
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> " As if the existence of post-abortion trauma exists weren’t controversial enough, an Oxford academic argues in the Journal of Medical Ethics that it makes no difference to the morality of abortion anyway. "




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