Re: (GRE Success! ) An easy one - correct this sentence

Aah ! yes. These are much better. Especially the 1st one.

On Thu, Sep 13, 2012 at 4:51 AM, Raghu Rao <[email protected]> wrote:

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> One of these ought to be an improved version.
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> "As if post-abortion trauma isn’t controversial enough, an Oxford
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> academic argues in the Journal of Medical Ethics that it makes no
> difference to the morality of abortion anyway."
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> "As if the existence of post-abortion trauma isn’t controversial
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> enough, an Oxford academic argues in the Journal of Medical Ethics
> that it makes no difference to the morality of abortion anyway."
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> "As if the fact/claim/assertion/assumption that post-abortion trauma
> exists isn’t controversial enough, an Oxford academic argues in the
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> Journal of Medical Ethics that it makes no difference to the morality
> of abortion anyway."
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> Also, I feel the "anyway" at the end of the sentence should go away.
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> My $0.02.
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> Raghu
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> On Wed, Sep 12, 2012 at 3:18 PM, Kartik Datwani <[email protected]>
> wrote:
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> > " As if the existence of post-abortion trauma exists weren’t
> controversial enough, an Oxford academic argues in the Journal of Medical
> Ethics that it makes no difference to the morality of abortion anyway. "
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