Re: (GRE Success! ) An easy one - correct this sentence

Raghu's suggestions are great. The original sentence had the word "exists"
which made it incorrect.

Thanks for playing!

Sincerely,

Srihari

On Thu, Sep 13, 2012 at 7:27 AM, Kartik Datwani <[email protected]>wrote:

> **
>
>
> Aah ! yes. These are much better. Especially the 1st one.
>
>
> On Thu, Sep 13, 2012 at 4:51 AM, Raghu Rao <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> **
>>
>>
>> One of these ought to be an improved version.
>>
>> "As if post-abortion trauma isn’t controversial enough, an Oxford
>>
>> academic argues in the Journal of Medical Ethics that it makes no
>> difference to the morality of abortion anyway."
>>
>> "As if the existence of post-abortion trauma isn’t controversial
>>
>> enough, an Oxford academic argues in the Journal of Medical Ethics
>> that it makes no difference to the morality of abortion anyway."
>>
>> "As if the fact/claim/assertion/assumption that post-abortion trauma
>> exists isn’t controversial enough, an Oxford academic argues in the
>>
>> Journal of Medical Ethics that it makes no difference to the morality
>> of abortion anyway."
>>
>> Also, I feel the "anyway" at the end of the sentence should go away.
>>
>> My $0.02.
>>
>> Raghu
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Sep 12, 2012 at 3:18 PM, Kartik Datwani <[email protected]>
>> wrote:
>> >
>> > " As if the existence of post-abortion trauma exists weren’t
>> controversial enough, an Oxford academic argues in the Journal of Medical
>> Ethics that it makes no difference to the morality of abortion anyway. "
>>
>> --
>> O< ascii ribbon campaign - stop html mail - www.asciiribbon.org
>>
>>
>
>
> --
> With kind regards
>
> Kartik Datwani
> Executive Trainee
> NTPC Ltd.
>
>  
>



-- 
Home: http://www.yamanoor.com/

Photography: http://www.yamanoor.net/

Laughs: http://ysrihari.blogspot.com/

Medical Devices: http://chaaraka.blogspot.com/

Earth: http://itshothere.org/