Re: (GRE Success! ) Is there something wrong with this sentence?

Hi

Armed with this knowledge, I and a team of others here at EPA are dedicated
to feeding people[,] [and] not landfills through the Sustainable Materials
Management Program’s <http://www.epa.gov/smm/> (SMM) Food Recovery
Challenge<http://www.epa.gov/smm/foodrecovery/index.htm>
. "

The only error I can find is the one with the [,]. [and] should be used in
place of [,].

Please let me know if there are other errors.
Thanks.


On Fri, Sep 28, 2012 at 9:44 AM, Srihari Yamanoor <[email protected]>wrote:

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>
> Hello Everyone,
>
> Try to see if you sense a flaw, grammatical or syntactical in the
> following sentence:
>
> "Armed with this knowledge, I and a team of others here at EPA are
> dedicated to feeding people, not landfills through the Sustainable
> Materials Management Program’s <http://www.epa.gov/smm/> (SMM) Food
> Recovery Challenge <http://www.epa.gov/smm/foodrecovery/index.htm>. "
>
> Sincerely,
>
> Srihari
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