Re: (GRE Success! ) Sentence Correction

Hi

""Your opposition will constitute Obstruction of Justice, Aiding and
Abetting in the elections fraud in forgery [,] and treason in allowing a
foreign citizen to usurp the civil rights of the U.S. citizens and the U.S.
Presidency, with [an] [the] aid of forged IDs" Taitz wrote in an
email<http://www.orlytaitzesq.com/?p=360759> to
Botterud ahead of [their] [his/her] court date. "

1. The [,] is required just before the "and" because the expression after
the "and" is a long one.
2. A little rearrangement of the elements of the second "and" makes the
sentence easier to read and understand.
3. [the] should be used instead of [an]. Or it could be completely omitted.
4. [his/her] should be used instead of [their] in order to refer to Taitz -
I am not sure about this.

Please tell me if I am wrong. Also please tell me about any other errors
present.

Thanks.


On Tue, Dec 4, 2012 at 3:40 AM, Srihari Yamanoor <[email protected]> wrote:

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>
> Hello Everyone,
>
> Can anyone find mistakes in this sentence?
>
> Please ignore the context: ""Your opposition will constitute Obstruction
> of Justice, Aiding and Abetting in the elections fraud in forgery and
> treason in allowing a foreign citizen to usurp the U.S. Presidency with an
> aid of forged IDs and usurp the civil rights of the U.S. citizens," Taitz
> wrote in an email <http://www.orlytaitzesq.com/?p=360759> to Botterud
> ahead of their court date. "
>
> Source:
> http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/12/02/orly-taitz-obama-college-records_n_2229370.html
>
> Good Luck,
>
> Srihari
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