Re: (GRE Success! ) Sentence Correction

Hello Kartik,

I would add correction "elections fraud in forgery" to "elections fraud and
forgery". I think [their] court date is fine.

Thanks much for playing!

Sincerely,

Srihari


On Wed, Mar 27, 2013 at 11:52 PM, Kartik Datwani <[email protected]>wrote:

> **
>
>
> Hi
>
> ""Your opposition will constitute Obstruction of Justice, Aiding and
> Abetting in the elections fraud in forgery [,] and treason in allowing a
> foreign citizen to usurp the civil rights of the U.S. citizens and the U.S.
> Presidency, with [an] [the] aid of forged IDs" Taitz wrote in an email<http://www.orlytaitzesq.com/?p=360759> to
> Botterud ahead of [their] [his/her] court date. "
>
> 1. The [,] is required just before the "and" because the expression after
> the "and" is a long one.
> 2. A little rearrangement of the elements of the second "and" makes the
> sentence easier to read and understand.
> 3. [the] should be used instead of [an]. Or it could be completely omitted.
> 4. [his/her] should be used instead of [their] in order to refer to Taitz
> - I am not sure about this.
>
> Please tell me if I am wrong. Also please tell me about any other errors
> present.
>
> Thanks.
>
>
> On Tue, Dec 4, 2012 at 3:40 AM, Srihari Yamanoor <[email protected]>wrote:
>
>> **
>>
>>
>> Hello Everyone,
>>
>> Can anyone find mistakes in this sentence?
>>
>> Please ignore the context: ""Your opposition will constitute Obstruction
>> of Justice, Aiding and Abetting in the elections fraud in forgery and
>> treason in allowing a foreign citizen to usurp the U.S. Presidency with an
>> aid of forged IDs and usurp the civil rights of the U.S. citizens," Taitz
>> wrote in an email <http://www.orlytaitzesq.com/?p=360759> to Botterud
>> ahead of their court date. "
>>
>> Source:
>> http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/12/02/orly-taitz-obama-college-records_n_2229370.html
>>
>> Good Luck,
>>
>> Srihari
>>
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>
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