Re: : Editorial nit w/SIP draft

Miguel Garcia <[email protected]> Tue, 18 Oct 2005 09:37:53 +0300

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Glen Zorn (gwz) wrote:

> Description of issue: Improper English language usage
> Submitter name: Glen Zorn
> Submitter email address: [email protected]
> Date first submitted: 17 Oct 05
> Document: sip 
> Comment type: E
> Priority: 1
> Section: 3
> Rationale/Explanation of issue: "advertisement", not "advertising"
> Lengthy description of problem: Paragraph 8 says "Advertising of this
> application is specified in Section 6."
> Requested change: "Advertisement of this application is specified in
> Section 6."
> 

OK, I will do the change.

/Miguel
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