draft-ietf-adslmib-gshdslbis-05 last call

Thanks, Clay, for all of your work.

If anyone has any further issues with this draft, please voice them ASAP.  
If nothing is posted prior to 22:00Z Thur. next week we will conclude the WG 
Last Call and refer the document for publication.

Regards,

Mike




>From: "Clay Sikes" <[email protected]>
>To: adslmib mail list <[email protected]>
>Subject: [Adslmib] draft-ietf-adslmib-gshdslbis-05
>Date: Thu, 23 Sep 2004 13:46:29 -0400
>
>All,
>
>The current version of the "Definitions of Managed Objects for G.shdsl.bis 
>Lines" draft is -05. Please accept my apology for not keeping this list up 
>to date on the changes. This message should outline the changes made to the 
>draft, since the -02 version.
>
>On August 20, 2004, Mike Sneed, the adslmib Chair, issued a Last Call on 
>version -02 of the draft.
>
>On August 24, 2004, Randy Presuhn, sent two messages containing a list of 
>comments and issues with version -02. Let me say that I am extremely 
>grateful to Randy for the time he put in the review. His review was 
>extremely detailed and generated an awesome list of comments. His messages 
>containing the comments can be found on the ADSL MIB Discussion Archive. 
>The changes from version -02 to version -03 address each comment Randy had. 
>Below is an outline of the significant changes:
>1. The tool I used to generate a draft was updated which resulted in some 
>boiler plate and white space changes.
>2 Changes to the HDSL2-SHDSL-LINE-MIB portion were as follows:
>2a.. LAST-UPDATED was updated.
>2b. WG-URL was added.
>2c. REVISION list was collapsed and updated.
>2d. Added explicit bounds to objects pertaining to Rates. The explicit 
>bound matches Unsigned32 in SMIv2.
>2e. Added REFERENCEs to the objects in the hdsl2ShdslInventoryTable.
>2f. Added  hdsl2ShdslPayloadRateGroup.
>2g. Removed hdsl2ShdslStatusMaxAttainablePayloadRate and 
>hdsl2ShdslStatusActualPayloadRate from the hdsl2ShdslSpanStatusGroup and 
>add them to the hdsl2ShdslPayloadRateGroup.
>2h. Changed the hdsl2ShdslCurrShdslGroup to hdsl2ShdslWirePairGroup.
>
>I messed up the process of submitting version -03 with respect to saying 
>what version it was and having that match what was in the draft, so I 
>submitted version -04. In version -04, the LAST-UPDATED and REVISION were 
>updated. Even when I submitted version -04 to the IETF, I had everything in 
>the draft correct, but I stated in my email it was -03. I guess I'm just a 
>slow-learning, stupid newbie. Fortunately, the IETF didn't post what said, 
>but posted what was in the draft, so it worked out. God bless the IETF!
>
>On September 2, 2004, Randy Presuhn, commented that I had some dangling 
>references after the last round of edits. As a result, version -05 was 
>submitted with the following changes:
>1. LAST-UPDATED was updated.
>2. REVISION was updated. Remember the REVISIONs are collapsed since the 
>draft is that close to being an RFC.
>3. The following dangling references were removed:
>3a. RFC 1155
>3b. RFC 1157
>3c. RFC 1212
>3d. RFC 1215
>3e. RFC 1901
>3f. RFC 3412
>3g. RFC 3413
>3h. RFC 3416
>3i. RFC 3417
>3j. T1.213-2001
>
>This should bring us up to the -05 version of the draft. I didn't go 
>through the details of each change. Instead, I highlighted the "major" 
>ones. In anyone needs to look at any of the versions, please let me know 
>and I would be happy to send them to you.
>
>Again, sorry I haven't been updating the list. As a newbie, I wasn't sure 
>if I should, but since have learned that it's necessary.
>
>Regards,
>Clay Sikes
>
>
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