[dhcwg] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification -12: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-12: Yes

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# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-12
CC @ekline

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## Comments

### S3

* "After successfully assigning...configured IPv6 address" ->
  "After successfully assigning...configured valid IPv6 address"

  This would match the RFC 4862 "valid addresses" specificity used in S4.2.

## Nits

### S3

* "the client MUST NOT register any addresses" ->
  "the client MUST NOT register any addresses using the mechanism in this
   specification"



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