Re: IETF Last Call Results for FAX WG Documents

Hollenbeck-san,
Claudio-san, Tamura-san

Hollenbeck, Scott wrote:
>
>The IETF last call for these documents:
>
>draft-ietf-fax-esmtp-conneg-09.txt
>draft-ietf-fax-ffpim-04.txt
>draft-ietf-fax-faxservice-enum-02.txt
>
>has concluded.  The only comments received were those I provided and some
>provided by IANA.  They can be found in the I-D tracker, but I will repeat
>them here for the benefit of the WG.  Please note that all three documents
>will need to be updated before I will ask the IESG to review them:

I revised "draft-ietf-fax-faxservice-enum-02.txt" according to 
your comments. I have submitted "draft-ietf-fax-faxservice-enum-03.txt"
as I-D.

>
>draft-ietf-fax-faxservice-enum-02.txt:
>- There's a reference to [KEYWORDS] on the first page, but no such reference
>exists.  Please add a reference to RFC 2119. if that's the reference being
>described.

I added RFC 2119.

>
>- The line lengths get a little long in section 3 (I-D nit, "No text beyond
>the 72nd column of a line").

I corrected.

>
>- In section 4, please change the example to use one of the example domain
>names cited in RFC 2606 instead of "ifax.com".  example.com perhaps?

I changed the example as you said.

>
>- Please split references into normative and informative subsections in
>section 6 (I-D nit).  You can leave informative out if all references are
>normative.

I added normative subsections. There is no informative reference.

>
>- Update the [ENUMbis] reference to point to RFC 3761.

I updated it.

>
>- Remove the reference for [FFPIM].  I don't see it used anywhere in the
>document.

I added [FFPIM] in the paragraph below.  

    accordance with "Simple Mode of Facsimile using Internet 
    Mail" [RFC2305] or "Extended Facsimile using Internet 
    Mail" [RFC2532]. "Full Mode Fax Profile for Internet Mail" [FFPIM]
    is applied when it is approved as an Internet standards-track 
    specification.

And, I leave it in the reference section as below.

     [FFPIM] Crocker, D., G. Klyne, "Full-mode Fax Profile for 
     Internet Mail", DRAFT-IETF-FAX-FFPIM-04(work in progress), 
     June 2004


Best Regards,

Kiyoshi Toyoda