Re: For protocol-08 draft update later

Weiming,

The best place to capture such things is on the tracker.
On the list they tend to get lost.

cheers,
jamal

On Fri, 2006-08-12 at 21:50 +0800, Wang,Weiming wrote:
> The following is the typoes or errors of the protocol-08 draft I found and accumulated till now. For fear I might forget it, just post it to list now for the active editor of protocol draft update later : 
> 
> 1: The protocol-08 section 4.3.1.2.1.  Transaction Definition on ACID definition
>    obviously missed the 'Durability' item.
> 
> 2: Section 4.2 the following text duplicated:
> 
>    For the FE to properly complete the transition to the DOWN state it
>    must stop packet forwarding and that this may affect multiple LFBs.
>    How this is achieved is outside the scope of this specification.
> 
> 3: Figure 10 Header Flags only draws 31bits rather than 32bits. 
> 
> 4. draft-ietf-forces-protocol-08.txt, page 88,89,90,91: 
>                  <specialValue value="0">
>                    <name>CEHBPolicy0</name>
>                    <synopsis>
>                        The CE heartbeat policy 0, refer to
>                        <xref target="FPL_sum" /> for details
>                    </synopsis>
>                    </specialValue>
>                  <specialValue value="1">
>                     <name>CEHBPolicy1</name>
>                     <synopsis>
>                         The CE heartbeat policy 1, refer to
>                         <xref target="FPL_sum" /> for details
>                     </synopsis>
>                  </specialValue>
> 
> where "xref target" is an xml2rfc error. there are also other same errors in the xml file.
> 
> Happy holidays!
> 
> Weiming