Re: LC: draft-ietf-forces-protocol-10.txt>>comments

Here are some comments on the draft-ietf-forces-protocol-10.txt.
1 Page43,table1,on association teardown message: Does Association Teardown 
message need LFB selectTLV, I can't find any clue in Section 7.5.3?
2 Page43,table1,on Heartbeat message:Section 7.10 says clearly that 
heartbeat message doesn't need LFB SelectTLV,so the top level TLV for this 
should be none?
3 Page43,table1,on packet redirect message:Section 7.9 says it doesn't need 
LFBSelectTLV,it only needs REDIRECT TLV,what is the right one?
4 Page43,table1,on Config message:what is the meaning of ()+,does anywhere 
explain this?
5 Page46,table2,on GET-RESPONSE TLV:   (RESULT-TLV)* (what is the meaning 
of ()* ?)
6 Page46,table2 and page50 table 3:here is conflict on Redirect TLV, table 
2 treats Redirect TLV as a kind of Oper TLV while table 3 not,which is 
right?
7 suggestion:we should add a tree structure for Packet redirect 
message,also for association setup response message,Association Teardown 
Message,config 
response message and query response message to clarify the format of the 
specified messages.
Yours,Fenggen
>From: Patrick Droz <[email protected]>
>Reply-To: Patrick Droz <[email protected]>
>To: [email protected]
>Subject: LC: draft-ietf-forces-protocol-10.txt
>Date: Tue, 5 Jun 2007 15:02:54 +0200
>
>As you have seen we have version 10 out. I would like to initiate
>LC for the protocol draft starting today June 6th. The LC duration
>is 2 weeks and will end on June 20th. Please raise your final 
>comments
>and issues.
>
>Patrick
>
>
>[email protected] wrote:
>>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
>>directories.
>>This draft is a work item of the Forwarding and Control Element 
>>Separation Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>>	Title		: ForCES Protocol Specification
>>	Author(s)	: A. Doria, et al.
>>	Filename	: draft-ietf-forces-protocol-10.txt
>>	Pages		: 122
>>	Date		: 2007-6-4
>>
>>This document specifies the Forwarding and Control Element 
>>Separation
>>    (ForCES) protocol.  ForCES protocol is used for communications
>>    between Control Elements(CEs) and Forwarding Elements (FEs) in 
>>a
>>    ForCES Network Element (ForCES NE).  This specification is 
>>intended
>>    to meet the ForCES protocol requirements defined in RFC3654.  
>>Besides
>>    the ForCES protocol messages, the specification also defines 
>>the
>>    framework, the mechanisms, and the Transport Mapping Layer 
>>(TML)
>>    requirements for ForCES protocol.
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