Re: WG Last call on: "Requirements For Adding Optical Support To GSMPv3"

Hi,
i still have some minor last minute comments since the last round.

cheers,
Ken

6.4.
"...in any case[4]." should it point to the gsmpv3 spec or elsewhere?

6.5. first para: "optical switches used in e ither"
                                            ^
7.1.
[5]->[4]

7.1.1
general comment. i think the whole chapter with sub-chapters should be 
rewritten. Solutions are valuable, but maybe not in a requirements doc.
The requirement here seems to me to be a need for clarifications and 
examples.

7.1.1.4
More flag-> More value

7.1.2.
[5]->[4]
comment: so the question is: should GSMP acknowledge Events or not? what 
is the requirement?

7.2.
[5]->[4]

7.2.1
Missing chapter or has the numbering disappeared?

7.4.1.
looses->loses
draft->[4]
comment: isn't the requirement here that [4] should specify how to 
introduce an additional controller to an already existing partition? 
Also since this is a requirement doc, should it suggest solutions?

7.5.
chapter relates to 7.1.2. could it be merged?

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avri doria wrote:

> Hi,
>
> As was discussed at IETF53, as soon as the burst requirements were 
> added to the
> Optical Support Requirements draft, it was going to be brought to the 
> group for
> WG Last Call.  This draft has now be submitted with those changes.
>
>     Title        : Requirements For Adding Optical Support To GSMPv3
>     Author(s)    : G. Kullgren et al.
>     Filename    : draft-ietf-gsmp-reqs-03.txt
>     Pages        : 16
>     Date        : 2002-9-27
>     A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-gsmp-reqs-03.txt
>
>
>
>
> The intention of this WG last call is towfold:
> - Are these the requirements we must meet support GMPLS in the next 
> revision of the GSMP spec
> - Is this ID ready to be sent on to IESG for consideration as an 
> Informational RFC
>
> The last call will last the customary 2 weeks, and is scheduled to end 
> 15 Oct, 2002.
>
> Please read the draft and send commentd to this list.
>
> Thanks
>
> a.
>
> -- 
> Avri Doria
> wg co-chair
>
>
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