FW: evaluation: draft-ietf-hubmib-power-ethernet-mib

I am going to assume that the hubmib WG will agree if I
make the editorial changes/fixes (fixing typos) in the
form of an RFC-Editor note.
If anyone objects, pls let me know asap!

Thanks,
Bert 

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Subject: evaluation: draft-ietf-hubmib-power-ethernet-mib

Notes:

     pethPsePortTable OBJECT-TYPE
           SYNTAX      SEQUENCE OF PethPsePortEntry
           MAX-ACCESS  not-accessible
           STATUS      current
           DESCRIPTION
               "A table of objects that display and control the power
                characteristics power Ethernet ports on a Power Source

--->missing "of" in "characteristics of power Ethernet ports"?


         pethPsePortPowerPairsControlAbility OBJECT-TYPE
        SYNTAX TruthValue
        MAX-ACCESS read-only
        STATUS current
        DESCRIPTION
             "Describes the capability of controlling the power pairs
             functionality to switch pins for sourcing power.
             The value true indicate that the device has the capability
             to control the power pairs. When false the PSE Pinout
             Alternative used cannot be controlled through the
             PethPsePortAdminEnabe attribute."

--->should be PethPsePortAdminEnable?

        pethPsePortPowerPairs OBJECT-TYPE
        SYNTAX INTEGER   {
                   signal(1),
                   spare(2)
         }
        MAX-ACCESS read-write
        STATUS current
        DESCRIPTION
            "Describes or controls the pairs in use. If the value of
             pethPsePortPowerPairsControl is true, this object is
             writable.
             A value of signal(1) menas that the signal pairs

--->menas should be means?