RE: FW: evaluation: draft-ietf-hubmib-power-ethernet-mib

All edits are OK with me. Thanks for catching them. Dan


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: 21 August, 2003 12:34 PM
> To: Hubmib Mailing List (E-mail)
> Cc: Ted Hardie (E-mail)
> Subject: [Hubmib] FW: evaluation: draft-ietf-hubmib-power-ethernet-mib
> 
> 
> I am going to assume that the hubmib WG will agree if I
> make the editorial changes/fixes (fixing typos) in the
> form of an RFC-Editor note.
> If anyone objects, pls let me know asap!
> 
> Thanks,
> Bert 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: woensdag 20 augustus 2003 1:29
> To: [email protected]; [email protected]
> Subject: evaluation: draft-ietf-hubmib-power-ethernet-mib
> 
> Notes:
> 
>      pethPsePortTable OBJECT-TYPE
>            SYNTAX      SEQUENCE OF PethPsePortEntry
>            MAX-ACCESS  not-accessible
>            STATUS      current
>            DESCRIPTION
>                "A table of objects that display and control the power
>                 characteristics power Ethernet ports on a Power Source
> 
> --->missing "of" in "characteristics of power Ethernet ports"?
> 
> 
>          pethPsePortPowerPairsControlAbility OBJECT-TYPE
>         SYNTAX TruthValue
>         MAX-ACCESS read-only
>         STATUS current
>         DESCRIPTION
>              "Describes the capability of controlling the power pairs
>              functionality to switch pins for sourcing power.
>              The value true indicate that the device has the 
> capability
>              to control the power pairs. When false the PSE Pinout
>              Alternative used cannot be controlled through the
>              PethPsePortAdminEnabe attribute."
> 
> --->should be PethPsePortAdminEnable?
> 
>         pethPsePortPowerPairs OBJECT-TYPE
>         SYNTAX INTEGER   {
>                    signal(1),
>                    spare(2)
>          }
>         MAX-ACCESS read-write
>         STATUS current
>         DESCRIPTION
>             "Describes or controls the pairs in use. If the value of
>              pethPsePortPowerPairsControl is true, this object is
>              writable.
>              A value of signal(1) menas that the signal pairs
> 
> --->menas should be means?
> 
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