FW: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-epon-mib-05.txt

 


 

-----Original Message-----
From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:[email protected]] 
Sent: Thursday, October 26, 2006 4:17 PM
To: [email protected]
Cc: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); [email protected]
Subject: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-epon-mib-05.txt

Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.


Draft: draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-epon-mib-05.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email protected]> Review
Date: 26 October 2006 IETF LC Date: 19 October 2006


Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC.


Comments:

Acronyms should also be expanded in the title of the draft.

Generally, abstracts should not have references so that they could be
distributed independently of the main document. The author may want to
consider removing all references from the abstract.


Thanks,

Gonzalo