RE: Small editorial fix for draft-ietf-impp-im-00.txt

"Peterson, Jon" <[email protected]> Mon, 18 Nov 2002 09:58:31 -0500
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.impp
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Thanks, I'll make sure to correct that.

Jon Peterson
NeuStar, Inc.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Derek Atkins [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: Monday, November 18, 2002 6:52 AM
> To: [email protected]
> Cc: [email protected]
> Subject: Small editorial fix for draft-ietf-impp-im-00.txt
> 
> 
> 
> The last paragraph of section 1 (Introduction) should be changed from:
> 
>   In order to provide a means for the preservation of end-to-end
>    features (especially security) to pass through instant messaging
>    interoperability gateways, this specification also provides
>    recommendations for instant messaging document formats 
> that could be
>    employed by presence protocols.
> 
> to
> 
>   In order to provide a means for the preservation of end-to-end
>    features (especially security) to pass through instant messaging
>    interoperability gateways, this specification also provides
>    recommendations for instant messaging document formats 
> that could be
> |  employed by instant messaging protocols.
> 
> -derek
> 
> -- 
>        Derek Atkins
>        Computer and Internet Security Consultant
>        [email protected]             www.ihtfp.com
> 



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