RE: Small editorial fix for draft-ietf-impp-im-00.txt
"Peterson, Jon" <[email protected]> Mon, 18 Nov 2002 09:58:31 -0500
| Newsgroups | gmane.ietf.impp |
|---|---|
| Message-ID | <[email protected]> |
Thanks, I'll make sure to correct that. Jon Peterson NeuStar, Inc. > -----Original Message----- > From: Derek Atkins [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Monday, November 18, 2002 6:52 AM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected] > Subject: Small editorial fix for draft-ietf-impp-im-00.txt > > > > The last paragraph of section 1 (Introduction) should be changed from: > > In order to provide a means for the preservation of end-to-end > features (especially security) to pass through instant messaging > interoperability gateways, this specification also provides > recommendations for instant messaging document formats > that could be > employed by presence protocols. > > to > > In order to provide a means for the preservation of end-to-end > features (especially security) to pass through instant messaging > interoperability gateways, this specification also provides > recommendations for instant messaging document formats > that could be > | employed by instant messaging protocols. > > -derek > > -- > Derek Atkins > Computer and Internet Security Consultant > [email protected] www.ihtfp.com > [reminder: [email protected] for non-technical discussions, please]