Small editorial fixes for draft-ietf-impp-pres-00.txt

In seciton 3.1, change:

   If the response operation indicates success, the service immediate
   invokes the notify operation to communicate the presence information
   to the WATCHER, e.g.,

to:

|  If the response operation indicates success, the service immediately
   invokes the notify operation to communicate the presence information
   to the WATCHER, e.g.,

In section 3.2, this is confusing:

   To resolve identifiers associated with the Presence A client
                                     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   determines the address of an appropriate system running a server by
   resolving the destination domain name that is part of the identifier
   to either an intermediate relay system or a final target system.

-derek
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       Derek Atkins
       Computer and Internet Security Consultant
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