Re: [pkt-prov] MTA MIB Error OID table - a number ofques tions

Hi -

I like this latest proposal more.  However, I think the DESCRIPTION of
pktcMtaDevErrorOidIndex needs a little more work.  Specifically,

> From: "Eugene Nechamkin" <[email protected]>
> To: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <[email protected]>
> Cc: <[email protected]>
> Sent: Thursday, January 13, 2005 9:19 PM
> Subject: RE: [ipcdn] [pkt-prov] MTA MIB Error OID table - a number ofques tions
...
> pktcMtaDevErrorOidIndex  OBJECT-TYPE
 ...
>           pktcMtaDevErrorOidsTable. In this case, the value of the
>           pktcMtaDevErrorOid, pktcMtaDevErrorValue, and

remove pktMtaDevErrorOid from this list.

>          pktcMtaDevErrorReason objects for the 1024-th table entry
>           MUST all be contain the following error string:

replace "be contain" with "be"

>           '<Err_OID> - Too many errors in the configuration file.'.
>           In this string, the <Err_OID> is the meta-symbol representing
>           the corresponding Error OID. This meta-symbol contains

"contains" should be something like "will be replaced with"

>           the human readable representation (character
>          string) of the pktcMtaDevErrorsTooManyErrs object,
>           i.e. the string '.1.3.6.1.2.1.XXX.1.1.4.1'.

Delete the leading "."

Add:
            The object pktMtaDevErrorOid MUST in this case have the
             value '1.3.6.1.2.1.XXX.1.1.4.1'

>     ************************************************************
>     * NOTES TO RFC Editor (to be removed prior to publication) *
>     * Please replace XXX with the IANA-assigned number under   *
>     * mib-2.                                                   *
>     ************************************************************
>
>          The <Err_OID> MUST be present in the error string. The
>          rest of the error string will contain explanatory text
>          which should be semantically close to the error being
>          indicated."
...

This "should be semantically close" contradicts the "MUST" which
appears earlier.

Randy