Re: Updates to draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-00.txt

Thanks.  I will await the outcome of the meeting and
be ready to respond to any edits in a timely manner.


[email protected] wrote:
>
> Quick note: -00 is what's currently on the Internet-Draft servers, so
> the final form of this -01 is headed for submission after the Montreal
> meetings.  In the meeting, I intend to project at least what I consider
> the crucial paragraphs for detailed editing/wordsmithing:
> - Last paragraph of Section 1.2, forbidding behavioral dependencies
> - First paragraph of the security section on what to do if there's
>         a need to keep implementation details secret.
> Dave W took the latter paragraph directly from an email I sent, so
> blame me rather than him for any problems with that text.
>
> The -01 version of this draft is probably headed for WG Last Call
> within the next few weeks.
>
> Thanks,
> --David
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: David Wysochanski [mailto:[email protected]]
> > Sent: Friday, July 07, 2006 2:43 PM
> > To: [email protected]
> > Subject: [Ips] Updates to draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-00.txt
> >
> > Attached is an updated version of
> > draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key which
> > addresses all of the remaining items on my list.  Comments welcome.
> > Note that I will not be attending the Montreal meeting.  However, my
> > colleage, Tom Talpey should be in attendance.
> >
> > Significant changes are:
> >
> > 1. p. 2. Updated usage paragraph.  This seemed a little
> > vague, so I tried
> > to make it more specific and focus on prevention of the
> > previous problem
> > with JavaScript.  I also loosened the requirement for setting the key
> > value automatically to a SHOULD instead of a MUST (based on
> > another reviewer
> > comment).
> >
> > 2.  p. 4. Security updates related to logging and different levels of
> > risk for nodes.  These ideas came from a computer security reviewer,
> > and I believe address important issues.
> >
> > List of all changes (verified via RFC diff tool below)
> > draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-00.txt
> > draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-01r1.txt
> > - p. 2: Modified proper use paragraph
> > - p. 3: fix typeo
> > - p. 4: fix typeo
> > - p. 4: added paragraphs 3-5
> > - p. 8: added another contributor
> >
> > http://www1.tools.ietf.org/tools/rfcdiff/rfcdiff.pyht
> >
> >
> >
>

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