AD review of draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-02

Section 1.2., paragraph 3:
 >    The key is sent during operational parameter negotiation of an  
iSCSI
 >    session's login phase.  The intended use of this key is to provide
 >    enhanced logging and support capabilities, and to enable  
collection
 >    of iSCSI implementation and usage information.  Functional  
behavior
 >    of the iSCSI node (this includes the iSCSI protocol logic -- the
 >    SCSI, iSCSI, and TCP/IP protocols) MUST NOT depend on the  
presence,
 >    absence, or content of the key.  The key MUST NOT be used by iSCSI
 >    nodes for interoperability, or exclusion of other nodes.  To  
ensure
 >    proper use, key values SHOULD be set by the node itself, and there
 >    SHOULD NOT be provisions for the key values to contain user- 
defined
 >    text.

   Suggest to move the text starting with "Functional behavior..." to
   Section 3 (Overview is not the place for this.)

   Finally - why is this going for Informational and not PS? PS seems
   appropriate.

Lars
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Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories

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